I try my hand at writing fiction...
Submitted by Altima on January 05 2001 19:13:44
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Well I made an account at a story website and posted something I wrote a few days ago on it. I made it to be pretty politically correct so there's no BL in it, you can be critical of me for capitulating to modern social ethical pressures or something, I don't mind but I wanted to get the opinion of some of the people here, as there's a lot of educated minds and smart people around here who might appreciate it or give me some tips for improving me perhaps. The URL is http://public.stories.com/?altima Just to give a run down of what it is: The theme is exploring the possabilities of the same person living different lives where he made different choises in the past. He's not aware of the different scenarios himself though. The man isn't the happiest person around and in three different cases it shows how the same character is reacting to different circumstances and whether he's happy. I have something else I wrote today coming up but I don't feel like formatting it now. Opinions appreciated! |
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