Re: Good luck, Mike...
Submitted by Drifter on 2003-03-14 11:34:25, Friday
In reply to Re: Good luck, Mike... submitted by Michael Mejido on 2003-03-14 04:30:54, Friday
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But this is a very bad subject to keep 'civil'. Keeping a subject that is complete lunacy and sickness 'under control' is in itself lunacy. Watch "La Vita è bella" by Roberto Benigni for an example of how you can keep a subject that is complete lunacy and sickness 'under control'. So how does one do that? How does one like myself, who is telling a story, helps an audience to feel the emotions another person feels? How cna i do that, when *I* don't have the feelings myself? It's so vital to me to get those feelings across. I want people to feel their pain. daughter approaches the door to a room (make her younger than she is in your script) with a look of fear on her face. we see the door open, she looks up high (emphasizing the size difference). and says "Daddy, please no". A hand strong reaches out and pulls her inside. Door closes. We hear horrifying screams from within the room. camera pans to room next door where we see mom sitting down crying. The screams distraught her and she runs out of the house in tears. There you have one example of a scene with absolutely no sex that will allow people to feel their pain. Remember we have 5 senses? we dont need to SEE whats going on explicitly in order to feel it. There are many ways to do this, you chose the worst. I just gave you the basis for a whole scene which is much better than the child pornography you had in its place. Thats as much as I can do. If you still leave your script broken, dont come blame us when you fail your class. |
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