Youve never really said the audience you're showing it to. Judging by the content I assume the audience is composed of people who enjoy watching porn. So perhaps you should add an advertisement for a commercial porn site and at least make some money out of this. slightly sarcastically, Drifter PS. For those who dont enjoy or understand sarcasm, what this post means in a non-sarcastic way is: The problem with your movie is its pornographic nature, if you havent fixed that then your script is still just garbage. |